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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 5, 2010 22:10:23 GMT -5
lol
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 5, 2010 22:24:22 GMT -5
plus, how can a kiss be epic?
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Post by jmc1800 on Apr 6, 2010 22:12:24 GMT -5
Because it is! Duh!
Seriously, you need to start looking into the romance department... lol
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 6, 2010 22:47:30 GMT -5
“So where to now you have gotten your vengeance on josh token most of the demon army out, so what happens now?” kaleb asked me from behind the control of the helicopter. “Exactly, I took out most of the demon army; there are still some of those monsters.” I said pushing my blade out of my wrist. “But, would if you die out on the battlefield?” Jessica asked sadly, “then I die, its over, and I am fine with that because I have lived a full life.” I said and smiled at her, “you have not, you haven’t lived a full life yet your only seventeen!” she yelled as she took up, “no, age doesn’t matter, its all about doing enough events, and I have had plenty of ‘special’ events.” I said and did that weird thing with my fingers where you put two fingers up and bend them a little. “Like what?” kaleb interrupted, “I have fought demons, I have save people from death, I have kissed a girl, I’ve done enough things in my life.” I said with a laugh. “Well still you don’t deserve to die.” Jessica hit my shoulder and told me, I looked at her. “Set course for that massive hole we saw earlier…” I told kaleb and he turned the helicopter around and headed towards the gap. When we got there I looked down at a dark deep cave to the underworld. “Jessica.” I said and sat next to her. “Yeah?” she asked sadly, “I need you to know something before I die.” I said and put my hand on my leg, “What’s that?” she asked, I heard a demon call “come let us take the world down to the under world!” it yelled, “I love you.” I said calmly and kissed her, started to run and jumped off the helicopter into the dark gap…
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 7, 2010 18:42:42 GMT -5
When I jumped off the helicopter I saw nothing but darkness for what seemed to be hours. I finally landed on my feet on the surface of the under world, lave busted from the ground and into the air and a massive demon stood in front of many other demons. “Crap, this is going to be hard as shaving cream…” I said while I walked towards them. I stood in front of the massive demon now, I stood my back leaned forward a bit so that im ready to fight when I need to… “Leave this place or I will be forced to kill you…” he said and pulled his claws form him fingers. “Never…” I said with a grin, he slashed at me but before it cut my chest I jumped up and kicked him in the forehead and he stumbled back. “Kill him…” he said with a quiet yet dark voice. I looked over to see all the demons charging towards me, God, please help me…I thought then I had an urge to stick my hands out in front of me, so I did and flames blasted out of my palms of my hands and took them all to the ground. “Uh oh, just you and me now…” I said and started to walk towards him but he slashed me down my chest and grabbed one of my arms in each of his hands, and started to pull each of them, I pulled back with one of my arms and it was ripped off immediately, “Agh!” I yelled in pain and fell to the rough surface, and then I saw the helicopter come through the smoke, “No! Leave!” I yelled as loud as I could but it was to late I bullet was going towards the engine, and it didn’t miss. The helicopter came crashing to the ground, and I saw Jessica and Kaleb crawl out fine. But the demon was walking toward them with I blade in hand, I jumped onto him and stabbed him with my blade in the demons shoulder but it caught my arm I had left on fire. I dropped to the ground again but this time, crying in pain, not because I had no arm but that I was about to lose my best friend I the girl I loved… and I wasn’t going to let that happen! I jumped on the demon and clawed its eye out, stole its gun and shot it in the jaw, and it fell to the ground bleeding. I looked back at my friends and fell to the ground, every thing was back and all I could her is Jessica calling zeik, zeik, zeik… when I woke up I yelled in terror, Jessica and kaleb were on both ends of my bed, I moved my arm around and I now had a metal arm attached to were my real arm used to be. “You did it man, you defeated the demon, but you didn’t stop the end of the world.” Kaleb said to me sadly. “I think I need to leave you guys alone for a second…” kaleb said and left the room I looked at Jessica, “you remember what happened in that helicopter right before I jumped out?” I asked her, “yes, why?” she asked, “Well, you never told me, do you love me?” I asked her nervously, she smiled at me. “yes I love you, who wouldn’t after that person went through that much just to save me, so yes I do love you too.” She said, kissed me and helped me up so I could get outside. “So this is how it ends huh?” kaleb said and looked towards the sky, I put my hand on his shoulder, “no, its only the beginning…” I told him and looked at the sky, I felt Jessica put her head on my shoulder, I looked at her and she was looking at the sky to and I saw a flash of light…
The end
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Post by jmc1800 on Apr 7, 2010 22:22:29 GMT -5
Thats soo sweet! You really have to keep writing Wyatt! WOW!!!  |
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 7, 2010 22:38:03 GMT -5
thnx yeah in the second god needs zeik to go back to earth and defeat satan and all them
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Post by jmc1800 on Apr 8, 2010 9:40:07 GMT -5
with Jessica and Kaleb by his side, right?
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 8, 2010 19:45:07 GMT -5
definetly he needs his best friend and girl friend to help him with that...
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 8, 2010 20:49:09 GMT -5
“Zeik, I have been looking back at your time on earth, now I want you to go back.” A voice echoed itself into a white nothing. “Why me, god why not you, you’re so much more powerful…” I explained, “I will be there I will give you helps through your mission, you will be my body guard, you will be the most powerful angel beside me in n war…” the voice came again. “And what is the reward for this deed of yours?” I said and put my arms out in question. “I already told you, you will be the most powerful angel besides me, and you will get Jessica back…” the voice came, and I broke out in anger, “take me down there, now!” I yelled into the light and closed my eyes, when I opened them up I was back on earth, but I didn’t look like earth, it looked like the sun, it was covered with demons… I hid behind a pile of coal, when a demon came around the corner I jabbed it in the chest and stole its armor. I walked out and started to walk towards the ruined building were I thought Jessica was… when I reached the building, two demons stood in my way, “no one gets into the prison.” One told me and pushed me down, “no one pushes me and tells me what to do…” I said angrily and jabbed my knifes into each of there heads and hid the bodies in a cell. I walked in and josh was standing right there on a wall, “so zeik, you managed to come… too bad for your little girlfriend, Jessica wasn’t it, she was very convinced that you were going to rescue her, but you never came so she gave up on you and now she is awaiting execution…” he said to me, I closed my eyes as tears rolled down my cheeks, I ran at him and shoved my arm into his chest and pushed him into the wall so my face was about 5 inches from his. “Where is she!?” I yelled at him, he did not answer, “where!?” I yelled again and slammed his head into the wall and he fell to the floor almost unconscious. “For the last time I will ask you were is Jessica!?” I yelled at him and shook him by his shirt. “I will only tell you she is on the top floor nothing else…” he said with a grin, I gave him a dirty look at cut him across the face. I ran up to the first floor, there I are ten floors for crying out loud. I jumped onto the floor that I started on, “hey josh free kill!” I yelled with a laugh he pulled a lever and he did exactly what I wanted him to do. Fire came from a furnace under me and I shot up and grabbed onto the tenth floor edge and pulled myself up onto it, when I got up I kicked in the door in front of me, nothing. Next, nothing, nothing, nothing. Before I kicked the next one, I heard crying, and a weak voice. “Please demons, leave me alone…” the voice called. I cracked the handle and the door swung open. “Jessica!” I yelled and ran towards her and that’s when everything went wrong, the door behind me swung shut and joshed eyes come through the crack, but like I have never seen him before, in full demon form. Jessica screeched in terror. I couldn’t take to hear her in pain anymore. I picked her up and kicked at the wall and a heard came though the door behind me, I kicked it once more and it broke open. I looked down “hang on tight…” I whispered to her so josh wouldn’t expect us to jump and we did, I jumped off down the hill and under a shelter where we would hide for a while… “Are you ok?” I asked her. “Yes, thank you for coming back for me.” Jessica said with a half smile. “No problamo that what friends are for right?” I winked at her. “Yeah, I guess so…” she said with a frown on her face. “Why? Is something wrong?” I asked worried. “You know how we said we loved each other before the rapture, well I regret saying that now…” she said with a worried face. I looked at her then towards the exit, I gave her my key back to heaven, in a couple minutes it would take who ever was holding it back to heaven the plan was to have me and Jessica both hold it, but I couldn’t, I don’t know why but I just couldn’t. “Good bye Jessica…” I started; we both heard a demons voice call “I found them!” “forever.” I said, and leaned toward her like I was about to kiss her, but then retreated. I got up and looked at her behind my back she waved at me sadly and disappeared…
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 8, 2010 21:34:28 GMT -5
I ran outside into the demon infested world and put my hands behind my back, “take me away, into a cell, arrange an execution in an hour.” I said to josh and shoved my shoulder into his chest and kept walking. He turned around and pushed me down onto the ground. “Teach him a lesson…” josh said to the demons, and they all started to beat me with whips, and claw me with their claws, they picked me up and I grunted in pain. I looked down; I had slits all over me. I saw josh come to me, he slapped me across the face and punched me in the stomach. I jumped up and kicked him. “That’s it, break his legs, both of them, they came near me but I killed them both, before I could take them back in a demon grabbed both and ripped them off, then they came to me and stomped on my legs, they threw me against the ground, “agh!” I yelled in pain as I hit the ground crying, because of the pain of blood running from my hands and legs. “Why wait, lets kill you right now…” josh said with a grin, they put me in a steel headlock and hand lock like in the medieval times with the blade over my head. “Leave him alone jerks!” I heard kaleb yell and I saw him kill the executioner, but he was the one holding the blade up… the blade came down but I pulled myself forward and the blade sliced into my back to the bone. The heaven teleport was in front of me with kaleb holding onto it I grabbed it quickly and we were instantly teleported back in front of gods throne… I was still crying there was a blade cut through my back and I was about to die because I lost too much blood. I looked up at an angel that healed me instantly. Jessica came in; I looked at her then turned my back to her and stood there with my arms crossed. “What are we going to do?” I asked. “Do you want to go back down there?” god asked calmly. “I looked at Jessica and turned my head and closed my eyes, “I’ll do it, I wont let the earth be completely destroyed.” I started to walk towards a teleporter; “don’t be surprised if I don’t come back though…” and I held it and disappeared…
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Post by jmc1800 on Apr 8, 2010 21:49:02 GMT -5
Wait, wait, hold on... Why did I say that? Hello???
My knight in shining armor just came in and saved me from the devil himself, and I say I don't love him anymore???
Come on now people!!!
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 8, 2010 21:50:56 GMT -5
what some sadening needed to happen hats the worst things that i could think of
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 8, 2010 21:51:49 GMT -5
ok, since you didnt like that part what should happen next?
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 8, 2010 22:05:35 GMT -5
im dead serious tell me what happens next and i will put it in! lol
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