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Post by jmc1800 on Mar 29, 2010 20:58:26 GMT -5
Well, you could: Have us be driving away and have Josh running next to us and you have to jump out of the moving car, but we are driving on the edge of the world, so you would fall into the hole and i would have to get Kaleb to stop hyperventalating and go save you... lol just an idea... you don't have to do that...
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Post by wpp1000 on Mar 29, 2010 21:02:08 GMT -5
probably not meaning i just got killed.....
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Post by jmc1800 on Mar 29, 2010 21:03:12 GMT -5
NO! you live... someone has to kill the bad person in the end!
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Post by wpp1000 on Mar 29, 2010 21:28:06 GMT -5
thats going to be you or kcb500 not me im not smart enough and not strong enough! appearently lol
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Post by jmc1800 on Mar 30, 2010 19:01:08 GMT -5
Who said that?
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Post by wpp1000 on Mar 30, 2010 20:45:08 GMT -5
that happened in the book...
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Post by wpp1000 on Mar 30, 2010 20:45:28 GMT -5
Zeik has mysteriously survived his final frontier with josh now he is back to find his friends and have his revenge on josh………
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Post by wpp1000 on Mar 30, 2010 21:17:30 GMT -5
I woke up and I was on the grassy surface next to a grave stone, but the grave was busted open…whoa…what a day... I thought and got up. Where would kaleb and Jessica be? I thought long and hard… so I headed to kaleb’s house, I knew they would be there… they had to be…I opened the door and kaleb and Jessica were sitting on the couch looking at the TV. It had a video of the great times we used to have before… the accident… “Umm, hey guys…” I said nervously. Kaleb turned around and got up, “how are you alive?” he asked loud enough for Jessica to hear, she got up and ran at me and hugged me hard enough for me not to breath. I pushed her away from me eventually, did I mention that when it come to hugging she is strong as metal. “I…don’t know.” I replied sounding confused, I looked at my hands and…no claws… “Shi-… I was going to say shaving cream…” I said with a laugh, “what?” Jessica asked, “I don’t have claws anymore…” I said quickly. “No, you don’t, but you have those…” kaleb said calmly and pointed to my wrist. I looked at my wrist and bent my hand backwards and my arm started to hurt and a blade slung out of my wrist. “That’s amazing!” I yelled, “We had the doctors inject metal into your blood, because they needed to experiment…” Jessica added. I looked at my special watch/ compass, surprised that it still works, “you guys ready go to what’s left of the world, because that’s where josh is and that where we stop it… stop it all…” I said with a grin across my face, “I’m ready when you are.” Kaleb said with a straight voice, “I’m ready to stop all of this, this time…” Jessica said with a smile, “hopefully I’m strong enough with these this time, and I don’t die… let the journey begin…” I said and started for the door but when I reached it I dropped my head, “again…” I whispered and remembered all the people who were disappointed because I failed… I stepped outside and ran into the street and disappeared into the distance…
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Post by kcb500 on Apr 1, 2010 23:51:35 GMT -5
*Kaleb dies
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 2, 2010 0:21:17 GMT -5
no i just run off lol
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 2, 2010 17:58:24 GMT -5
I reached a road between a television store and a doctor’s office and sat down and put my back on a red brick wall, “what am I supposed to do God, im afraid to try because if I fail im done, but if I survive the police will think im a murderer…” I said to myself and put my head back. “Hey zeik…” I heard close by, I jumped to my feet and got my wrist blades ready to attack… but the sound came from one of the TV’s inside the television store, it was josh. “Im at the capital building if you come in time you might see your parents one last time and…” before I pointed my gun at the television screen and shot it. I pulled my phone, “hey guys I need our truck and fast…” I whispered into it. Eventually a truck came and the slide open door came open and I jumped into it. We went about ten miles before disaster struck, there were massive gaps in the road ahead. “Kaleb switch me spots I told him and we switched spots so I was driving. I swerved the car to the right just in time and stomped on the brakes and the car stopped in front of a hole and I looked up, saw a helicopter, smiled and let kaleb take the wheel. “See you guys in a little while hopefully im still alive…” I said with a chuckle, “where are you going?” Jessica asked, “I looked down to stop the rest of my family from dying…” I said and grabbed a mine from one of the drawers in the truck, set it one the ground, and detonated it…
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 2, 2010 18:34:43 GMT -5
When the mine blew I blew with it I flew into the air and high enough to get to the helicopter. I clenched my fingers around the door handle and stuck my knife into the pilot’s temple and he fell like a golden safe. I quickly got in, picked up Jessica and Kaleb and started to fly towards the capital. When we got there I looked at a hole in the dome going down to a demon infested building. “I felt my face from the blast I had I scar across my left eye. The back of the helicopter opened up so I could jump out right into the building. “hey.” I heard Jessica call out behind me, “yeah?” I asked as I turned around so I could see her for what I thought would be the last time. “Am I ever going to see you again?” she asked me, worried, “I hope so…” I said, looked down, and then back at her “no…” I said sadly. “Then I won’t ever have to live up to this.” She said, leaned over and kissed me. I smiled at her, “see you.” I said and jumped off into the hole on the roof into the building and stood up having my blades ready to kill, “aw, did someone get a boo boo…” josh said with a laugh, “yes and your about to get a boo boo, through your throat!” I yelled and rushed toward him but before I could a demon grabbed me and slammed me against one of the golden walls and I fell to the ground, I looked up at the demon and jumped up and jabbed my blades into its eyes, and got up. “I’ve improved…” I said as I walked towards josh. But he snapped his fingers together and two demons grabbed each of my arms and started to try to rip me in half, but I wouldn’t let them I had my blades slide out of my wrists and into the demons foreheads, and I dropped, I started to walk towards josh and he grew claws and slashed them against my chest. I tumbled back and tripped over a dead demon, and he came to me and grabbed me by the shirt and threw me into the wall, I jumped toward him and he threw me over him and into another wall, and he came towards me again, “I came more prepared then that.” I said weakly because I couldn’t breathe, flames came out of mines on my hands and feet, so I shot up through the hole in the roof, and onto the roof floor. Josh shot up as I was yelling from my bleeding and aching hands. “God, you are incredibly stupid.” He told me with a laugh and stomped on my stomach. Before he could do it again I rolled out of the way and tripped him and started to jab him in the chest over and over until he was nearly dead, “ok, ok I give up im done…” he told me weakly. “No, I will never be done, I will never give up, and I kill you today, not for revenge, but for my honor and the world…” I almost stabbed him but then he said “you may kill me this day but my master will have your life soon I swear it!” and I yelled in anger and stabbed him through each temple and ran and jumped off the edge and into kaleb’s helicopter and he flew us away quickly…
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 2, 2010 21:50:36 GMT -5
I sat in the helicopter, felt the gaps in my chest, and yelled in pain. “Dang, did you have fun in there?” kaleb said with a laugh, “actually, that was pretty fun…” I said sarcastically. Then I looked at Jessica and smiled. She smiled back, and then I heard a noise of a…plane… I looked out the helicopter to see a demon of some sort in a plane right next to us, “man he does not give up!” I yelled and jumped from the helicopter to the plane, but I was short I stabbed my blades into the bottom of the plane, I flipped myself into it and tried to stab him but he threw my hand to the side and skimmed me with his claws I retreated to the side of the plane where I crawled and took there engine out by stabbing it with my blades I jumped out and into the helicopter…and the plane behind me lost altitude and crashed into the ground, “Man, im getting good at this…” I said while I sat down. “So, did you win your fight at the capital?” Jessica asked as she sat down next to me, “No, but I got what I was going for…” I replied and smiled, “I killed josh…” I said with a straight voice. “So where to now?” kaleb asked and looked back, “dude? What’s wrong with you?” he said quickly, my vision became blurry and became darkness then I couldn’t hear or see, or communicate… “Zeik, wake up, please…” I finally herd Jessica’s voice call but it was quiet… suddenly, all my vision, and hearing came back so fast that I yelled in horror. “What happened?” I yelled at the doctor and grabbed him by the coat, “you lost too much blood and passed out…” he explained, “and if you don’t stay still your going to die, we are giving you new blood.” He told me and pressed down on my shoulder, “great, I fail again.” I said and clenched my fists, “I need to get out of here…” I said as I pulled the needle out of me and stood up, and walked toward the door, but Jessica came in front of me. “no, your going to sit down and get more blood because me and kaleb both don’t want you to die because we need you…” she said and pointed to the hospital bed. I gave her a half dirty look and sat back down. When all my blood was back, I put my actual cloths on and pushed Jessica to the side and walked towards the exit. “Hey, you have to pay for that, and if you don’t im calling the police!” I turned toward him and grinned at him and walked out the door… “sorry.” I told Jessica quickly, “for being a freaking jerk in there…” I told her and hung my head. She lifted it back up though, “don’t worry about it I can understand, you had every right to be angry.” She said with a grin. “I finally realize, that I have a place in this world, a piece of the puzzle and a blueprint of a master plan…” I said and smile at her… “im important…
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Post by jmc1800 on Apr 5, 2010 21:28:56 GMT -5
Thank you for finally realizing that there is someone in this world who knows that you are great and more than a retard who doesn't think he can do anything. =)
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Post by jmc1800 on Apr 5, 2010 21:29:25 GMT -5
I love your ending.
(The kiss is epic too! lol)
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