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Post by Isamina on Jun 20, 2010 15:18:08 GMT -5
“What May Come”
Dusk has fallen and the day is now done Golden clouds make the sky disappear When the sun has set, the night has begun Sound of swaying trees is all that I hear
Who can tell me what may lie in the day ahead, Will my hopes burn brighter in the day anew? Which path of decaying grass will I tread? Might there be a time when I know what to do?
Pray tell what may happen on the morrow, All I hope for becomes a dying dream, There will be naught but heartache and sorrow, And a grueling grief may be the end of me Now the sun has laid down it's head to rest Dusk has fallen, and so begins the test
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Post by jmc1800 on Jun 20, 2010 19:15:10 GMT -5
very well written!
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Post by kcb500 on Jun 21, 2010 0:47:36 GMT -5
Very nice. I like the vocabulary.
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kly445
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I can hug you!
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Post by kly445 on Jun 21, 2010 10:26:33 GMT -5
Very poetic!!!!
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chanelleo21
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i love chocolate!!!!!!!
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Post by chanelleo21 on Jul 1, 2010 20:33:53 GMT -5
thats amazing
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