Warriors Romance (PG-13)

[kly445]

I'm pretty sure the story is cut-off because Kcb is trying to make his readers wonder. A lot of authors do that. Kind of like in "The Giver", just leaves the readers wanting more.....

[kcb500]

DUMBEST ENDING EVER! I will forever hate The Giver for it's horrible ending. I hope someone out there makes a sequel in which all the characters die a horrible, painful death followed by the author!!!!

[jmc1800]

alrighty then...
maybe if you think that way about her, don't you think that your readers will reflect that same feeling toward you when you do that? ... just a thought...

[kly445]

Wow. But I quite agree with Kcb (that rhymed!), The Giver's ending was like, TERRIBLE!~!!!! I was truly disappointed about it.

[jmc1800]

i agree with both of you, The Giver's ending WAS horrific! I hated it too

[kcb500]

My best one other than the first one in my opinion.

Crowfeather and Leafool

Leafpool waited at the edge of the stream anxiously. She and Crowfeather had made their decision. Tonight was the night they would run away together.

"Leafpool?" A soft voice asked.

Leafpool looked up to see the lithe body of Crowfeather. "Hello Crowfeather." She murmured.

"Are you ready to leave?" He asked.

Leafpool nodded and lowered her head. "I just wish I could have said good bye to Squirrelflight." Her voice cracked with pain.

"It's alright." Crowfeather soothed her. "You have me now, and I love you."

Leafpool raised her head her eyes brimming with sorrow and joy. "Let's go before our clans realize we've left."

…

Leafpool looked out across the open moorland. They had left WindClan territory quite some time ago.

Crowfeather scented the air. "Rabbit." He meowed and took off after the small white rabbit that was dashing around.

Leafpool sighed and settled down underneath a tree. Did I do the right thing? She wondered. An image of Squirrelflight entered her brain but she pushed it away. Squirrelflight had Brambleclaw and she had Crowfeather.

Crowfeather dropped the plump rabbit interrupting her thoughts. "There's enough for us to share." He meowed.

Leafpool pushed it away. "Thanks, but I'm not hungry."

Crowfeather lied down next to her. "Are you alright?" He asked.

She nodded bleakly.

Crowfeather licked her affectionately. "It'll be alright." He promised.

Leafpool didn't respond and turned over on her side to fall asleep.

…

Leafpool looked around. She was in ThunderClan territory! Did that mean she had never really left with Crowfeather? She glanced to the side and saw the stream illuminated with stars. This is only a dream. She told herself.

"Hello Leafpool." A soft voice meowed behind Leafpool.

Leafpool spun around. "Spottedleaf!" She exclaimed. "Oh thank you so much for telling me to follow my heart!"

"You make your own choices I simply try to guide you. You think you followed your heart?" Spottedleaf asked.

Leafpool nodded. "My heart belongs to Crowfeather. He loves me and cares about me!"

"Follow your heart Leafpool, follow your heart." Spottedleaf vanished into darkness.

…

Leafpool woke up with a yawn. "Good morning Crowfeather." She meowed drowsily.

She lifted her head to see that Crowfeather wasn't there. He must be out hunting. She thought.

…

Crowfeather looked at Leafpool and stood up. "We need to keep going."

As much as she hated it, Leafpool hated it she agreed.

…

Leafpool trudged on forward with Crowfeather. She stopped to scent the air. "Badger!" She growled.

Crowfeather scented the air. "It's alright." He meowed.

Leafpool turned to him bewildered.

"Hello there Crowpaw, I have not seen Clan cats in a long time." Came a gruff voice.

Leafpool spun and stared at a large female badger. "Y-you can talk!" Leafpool stammered.

"Hello Midnight, and my name isn't Crowpaw any more, it's Crowfeather." Crowfeather dipped his head. "Why are you here?"

Midnight looked at Crowfeather. "I came here to stop my kin."

Leafpool tipped her head to the side, confused.

"My kin are drove out of their homes by cats, they are angry and are going to attack cats camps." Midnight continued.

Leafpool looked at Crowfeather as his eyes widened with fear.

"I have come to warn the clan cats." Midnight grunted.

Squirrelflight! Leafpool imagined her sister being torn apart by a badger.

"Good luck." Crowfeather meowed.

Midnight nodded and continued.

Leafpool turned to Crowfeather. "We have to go back!"

Crowfeather shook his head. "We can't! We already left our clans!"

Follow you heart. Leafpool recalled Spottedleaf's words.

Leafpool sighed. "Crowfeather, I thought that following my heart meant being with you. But now I realize, my heart belongs with ThunderClan."

Crowfeather stared into Leafpool's eyes intently. "I know, you're heart has always belonged to ThunderClan."

"Come on!" Leafpool beckoned with her tail. "Before we're too late!"

…

Leafpool and Crowfeather stood on opposite sides of the river. "I must go Crowfeather." She whispered.

Crowfeather nodded. "We can never see each other again." He meowed.

Leafpool nodded. She felt like her heart had been torn in half. "I love you Crowfeather." She meowed softly.

"And I love you." He replied.

Leafpool turned around and raced back to her camp feeling like her heart had been torn in half, and slightly hopeful at the same time.

Haha no happy ending for anyone

[kly445]

Aw come on!!!!!! This one was getting really good then....KABLAM!!!!! Just as sad as Romeo and Juilet. Can you make a happy ending story for once? or at least semi happy story? Btw this one was really awesome!!!!

[kcb500]

A happy ending? Trying to comprehend meaing of words... Yeah, later you will see one (or more) happy endings.

[jmc1800]

Ya! come on KCB, just for us, make one that has got a happy ending! lol

[kly445]

Yeah!!!!! plzzzzz???

[kcb500]

I said I'd give you guys a happy ending, not yet.

Mousewhisker and Hollyleaf

"You think you know me." Hollyleaf meowed, her voice echoing across the clearing.

Mousewhisker looked up at Hollyleaf, confused.

"You think you know me and my brothers, Jayfeather and Lionblaze of ThunderClan. You think you know us, but everything you have been told is a lie! We are not the kits of Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw!"

Mousewhisker gasped. "It can't be true!" He exclaimed.

"What?" A voice called out.

Mousewhisker looked over to see Brambleclaw jump to his paws.

"Squirrelflight, why is she talking such nonsense?" He demanded.

Mousewhisker looked over at Squirrelflight. Her eyes were brimming with sorrow.

"I'm sorry, Brambleclaw, but it's true. I'm not their mother and you are not their father." She mewed her voice cracking.

Mousewhisker looked back at Brambleclaw and saw his eyes flashing with fury. "Then who is?"

Squirrelflight turned her sad green gaze on Hollyleaf. "Tell them, Hollyleaf. I kept the secret for seasons; I'm not going to reveal it now."

Mousewhisker looked at Hollyleaf despairingly. Why was she doing this? This wasn't the cat that he loved.

"Coward!" Hollyleaf flashed at Squirrelflight.

Mousewhisker stared at Hollyleaf intently.

"I'm not afraid of the truth! Leafpool is our mother, and Crowfeather-yes, Crowfeather of WindClan-is our father." Hollyleaf yowled.

Mousewhisker turned around feeling dizzy. Is there any cat I can trust?

…

Mousewhisker headed slowly towards the camp feeling exhausted.

"Leave me alone!" Mousewhisker recognized the voice of Hollyleaf.

He took off in the direction of her trail.

Mousewhisker stopped panting. He heard a loud crashing sound. "No!" He breathed and dashed forward.

There was a collapsed tunnel in front of Mousewhisker. With a sickening feeling he realized that Hollyleaf was in there.

"Even if everyone thought you went crazy I still love you." He whispered, his voice choked with mixed emotions.

[kly445]

That's sorta confusing.....

[kcb500]

You need to have read the series.

[jmc1800]

That one was really good too... as usual...

When are you makeing the happy ending? just once? plz?

[kly445]

Ah, I guess that would be a good idea. But it was awesome, for the parts I understood.