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Post by jmc1800 on Apr 10, 2010 18:45:36 GMT -5
Well... whatever. when is the next one coming???
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Post by kcb500 on Apr 10, 2010 20:48:07 GMT -5
Now. Fireheart and Silverstream
Fireheart slipped through the reeds and stopped near the stepping stones. "Silverstream!" He whispered.
A head popped up on the other side of the river. "Fireheart, is that you?" Silverstream meowed.
"Yes." Fireheart meowed, flooded with relief that Silverstream was alright.
Silverstream stepped out onto the stepping stones. She started to jump across them, but stopped. "I think I just felt a kit kick!" She squealed.
Fireheart purred. "They'll be born any time now right?" He asked.
Silverstream nodded excitedly.
"What are you going to say if they ask who the father is?" Fireheart asked.
Silverstream stood up straight. "I'll tell them that it's my business." She meowed indignantly.
Fireheart nodded slowly.
Silverstream butted him in the shoulder. "Don't act so worried." She meowed. "Mistyfoot is the only one that knows."
"But can we trust her?" Fireheart muttered.
Silverstream narrowed her eyes. "Of course we can! Why are you so worried about me?"
Fireheart licked Silverstream affectionately. "Because I love you."
Silverstream returned the lick. "And I love you." Just trust me alright?"
Fireheart purred. "Alright I guess so."
There was a rustle in the reeds behind the two cats and Fireheart spun around, claws unsheathed.
Graystripe poked his head through the reeds. "Sheath your claws Fireheart it's only me." He meowed crossly.
Fireheart walked up to Graystripe. "Why are you so grumpy?" He asked playfully.
Fireheart saw Graystripe bristle. "Because, I don't like you meeting Silverstream. It's against the warrior code!"
Fireheart rolled his eyes. "The warrior code needs to be broken sometimes."
Graystripe spun around angrily and raced off into the trees. "I thought you were different than that!" He called back.
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Fireheart looked up at the stars. "Silverpelt is so beautiful." He breathed.
Silverstream nodded beside him. Then suddenly, her face crunched up in pain. "The kits are coming!" She gasped.
Fireheart took off towards the camp.
He burst into the medicine cat den. "Yellowfang! Silverstream is giving birth."
Cinderpelt looked up at Fireheart. "Yellowfang isn't here right now. Where's Silverstream at?"
"Sunningrocks." Fireheart meowed.
Cinderpelt grabbed a mouthful of herbs and started hobbling towards Sunningrocks.
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Fireheart looked down at Silverstream; she had just delivered two healthy kits.
"She's lost too much blood." Cinderpelt muttered.
Silverstream breathed in painfully. She looked up at Fireheart. "Take care of our kits for me. I love you Fireheart."
Silverstream took one last breath and died.
Fireheart looked down at Silverstream. "Silverstream? Silverstream!" Fireheart whispered.
"I lost her." Cinderpelt meowed.
"No!" Fireheart yowled.
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 10, 2010 22:27:11 GMT -5
sadness...
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Post by jmc1800 on Apr 11, 2010 19:26:44 GMT -5
That is well written and sad Kaleb.
(I like it but it didn't follow the books either! lol) =)
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 11, 2010 21:22:37 GMT -5
i wouldnt know i dont read it and im proud of of it.
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 11, 2010 22:18:37 GMT -5
im not really into warriors
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Post by kcb500 on Apr 11, 2010 22:27:03 GMT -5
Yeah, not enough "excitement" in it for you.
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 12, 2010 20:48:25 GMT -5
nope! =D
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Post by jmc1800 on Jun 1, 2010 22:51:37 GMT -5
You have issues WPP! there is tons of 'exitment'.
u r wrd
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Post by kcb500 on Jun 1, 2010 23:33:51 GMT -5
Jayfeather and Heathertail
Jayfeather scented the air near the WindClan border. He felt his neck fur rise. "WindClan!" He hissed.
Jayfeather broke through the bushes in front of him and tackled the WindClan cat that had crossed the border.
"What in StarClan's name?" Heathertail exclaimed.
Jayfeather batted at her underbelly. "So WindClan think they can just cross the border to steal prey whenever they want?" He hissed.
Heathertail threw Jayfeather off. "I'm not here to steal prey." She hissed.
Jayfeather leaped back to his feet. "Then why are you here?" He asked, puzzled.
"I'm here to see Lionblaze." Heathertail answered quietly.
Jayfeather searched her mind to see why she wanted to see Lionblaze. "You love him!" Jayfeather exclaimed.
Heathertail turned around. "Never mind, he hates me anyway."
For a second Jayfeather felt sorry for Heathertail. He shook his head. He shouldn't care about this cat's problem!
Heathertail bounded over the stream that marked the ThunderClan and WindClan border. She turned around. "I'm sorry I disturbed you."
Jayfeather looked at Heathertail but said nothing.
Heathertail spun around and left.
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Jayfeather looked out across WindClan territory and sighed. He knew he shouldn't be here, but he wanted to see Heathertail.
"Get out of here ThunderClan cat!" A voice growled behind Jayfeather.
Jayfeather scented the air. "Heathertail." He breathed.
Heathertail took a step backward. "Jayfeather? What're you doing here?"
Jayfeather took a step toward Heathertail. "I came to see you."
Heathertail gasped. "Why do you want to see me?"
Jayfeather fixed his sightless eyes on her. "I love you Heathertail."
"No! You can't" Heathertail exclaimed. "It's against the warrior code!"
Jayfeather shrugged. "I know you have feelings for me too."
Heathertail shook her head. "I don't! Now get off of WindClan territory!"
Jayfeather smiled. "You can't hide your feelings from me Heathertail! I know you love me too!"
"Get away from me!" Heathertail cried.
"We can run away together." Jayfeather meowed.
Heathertail shook her head. "No we can't leave our clans."
Jayfeather nodded. "Yes we can! My mother left her clan for Crowfeather!
"But look how that turned out!" Heathertail argued.
"They came back to their clans; we would never have to face them again!" Jayfeather countered.
Heathertail sighed. "Are you serious about this?"
Jayfeather nodded.
"Meet me here tomorrow." She murmured.
Jayfeather nodded and licked her gently on the ear.
"Good bye Jayfeather." Heathertail meowed awkwardly.
Jayfeather nodded and turned around to leave. "I love you Heathertail." |
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Post by jmc1800 on Jun 2, 2010 21:40:53 GMT -5
YOU CAN'T STOP THERE!!!!! WRITE MORE NOW NOW NOW!!!
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Post by kcb500 on Jun 2, 2010 23:04:04 GMT -5
That's the end of that one. Another coming soon.
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Post by jmc1800 on Jun 4, 2010 23:42:34 GMT -5
THE END!!! YOU CAN'T END THEIR STORY LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by kcb500 on Jun 5, 2010 22:02:56 GMT -5
Yes I can, I'm the author  |
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Post by jmc1800 on Jun 6, 2010 16:32:16 GMT -5
You twerp...
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