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Post by jmc1800 on Mar 15, 2010 23:36:06 GMT -5
Everybody should stop being depressing!! None of my stories someone is going to die! (maybe) Lol
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Post by kcb500 on Apr 1, 2010 23:53:18 GMT -5
Once again I fail at writing. Not my best work I kinda just threw it together, I'm kind of out of practice. This is when it gets confusing it you haven't read the series.  Chapter 1
Coryn paced back and forth in his hollow. After the death of his dear Uncle Soren there simply had been nothing to do. A burrowing owl called Digger stood silently next to the king. He had replaced Soren as the King’s advisor.
“Is something bothering you?” Digger asked.
Coryn nodded. “Ever since my uncle’s death, there’s been nothing to occupy my time. I can’t get my mind off of him.”
Digger opened his beak to respond but a messenger came crashing into the room. He stood at attention in front of the king. “Sir, hagsfiends have been spotted in the Shadow Forest!”
Coryn frowned. “You’re sure it’s not just some rumor?”
The messenger nodded. “I saw them with my own eyes!”
Coryn immediately lifted off into the air. “Tell the Band and the Flame Squadron to report to the Shadow Forest, armed.”
The messenger nodded. “Yes sir.”
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“Attack!” Coryn shreed at the top of his lungs in the way only Barn owls can.
Instantly the airspace in front of Coryn was crowded with hagsfiends. So many that Coryn lost his breath.
Deadly yellow streamed out of the hagsfiends eyes, frygnot!
Coryn felt his wings start to fold up and he was sure he was going yeep. Right as Coryn started falling out of the sky he felt something strong rustle in his gizzard. A deep green emitted from his eyes and the hagsfiends started to go yeep!
All the owls stopped and watched in wonder as their king forced all the hagsfiends out of the sky. What no-one noticed though was the stray hagsfiend creeping up on Coryn.
“Look out!” Someone screamed.
Coryn saw the hagsfiend in the corner of his eye but he was too slow. Right as the hagsfiend was about to get Coryn something drilled into it.
Blood poured everywhere, but it was not Coryn’s. The young king turned to see a female Barn owl, about his age. Her beak was stained with blood, she had just saved him! “Th-thank you.” Coryn stammered.
The owl smiled. “No problem, the name’s Tanya.” Tanya extended a talon.
Coryn shook her talon. “My pleasure, Tanya.”
Tanya blushed slightly. “What is the king doing out here?” She inquired.
“I came here to deal with hagsfiends.” Coryn replied, but he sounded as if the hagsfiends where the last thing on his mind.
Tanya opened her mouth to say something but she suddenly crumpled mid-flight
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Post by jmc1800 on Apr 5, 2010 21:38:50 GMT -5
Thats good writeing. When are you writing more?
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Post by kcb500 on Apr 6, 2010 18:31:06 GMT -5
I dunno whenever I feel like it.
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Post by jmc1800 on Apr 6, 2010 22:16:09 GMT -5
Sounds good to me. I can't wait for the next chapter. Are you going to be a auther when you grow up Kaleb?
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Post by kcb500 on Apr 6, 2010 22:33:59 GMT -5
I hope.
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Post by wpp1000 on Apr 7, 2010 22:46:11 GMT -5
...dang i dont feel ood about myself anymore lol good job dude
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Post by kcb500 on Apr 26, 2010 9:19:50 GMT -5
Facepalm. Spammers...
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Post by jmc1800 on May 1, 2010 21:28:35 GMT -5
and what is wrong with making conversatioin???
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Post by kcb500 on May 2, 2010 18:31:49 GMT -5
This isn't the place for conversation. PM or chatbox is, or general section
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Post by jmc1800 on May 9, 2010 23:32:17 GMT -5
whatever.... *sigh*
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